[@Achronum] Okay, few things [list][*]1) The color code looks to be either too close or identical to Tome's - so please switch it out. 
[*]2) Try to expand on his personality some more - the two paragraphs are looking really light and it's important you can really dig in here to understand your character 
[*]3) Since he's born in Astoria Oregon and I'm assuming that's where his family businesses are, how is he going to end up in Washington D.C.?[/list]