[@Lady Amalthea]

Thanks for feedback. I understand the meat and potatoes part, I've been working on more detail already.

As far as my post count, I unfortunately had to start a new account a few years ago, and this is my first time really back; so that's why it's such a low ratio. I use to frequent here, and had some pretty extensive Role Plays, with a lot of "meat"!

I guess the only way to prove myself worthy is to produce! So I will produce.

Thanks again.