A few more sheets to quickly review: [@Crispy Octopus] for Asceal [hider] One substantial issue is present: both BBeast and Mutton thought that your sheet was breaking the one-form rule. Based on some Discord talk I seem to recall that you intended her to always be a humanoid made of light, but to be able to greatly vary the brightness at will. The wording of your sheet makes it ambiguous if that's the case, though. Persona is good and plot potential is more than there; he's also worked out a reasonable arc that involves numerous other gods. Very good job on that. I very much like the (understandable) mentality toward the Architect that's mentioned. Mandatory nitpicking: the lack of a possessive apostrophe (specifically saying Architects instead of Architect's) is consistent. Also, 'temperment' should be 'temper[b]a[/b]ment'. Sheet is accepted, albeit contingent upon changes/clarification being made concerning the form. [/hider] [@Double Capybara] for Urhu [hider] We had universal agreement that your Sphere is cool and thematic, and on the Portfolio being perhaps a little bit odd but workable. From the abilities that you explicitly mentioned, it seems like you'll have plenty of powers that make sense and are unique. From Mk. II we know that you've never struggled to find stuff to post about, and knowing your favorite topics the focus on mortals is what I'd expected. For that reason I'm not worried in the slightest about you growing bored or not having things to post about; you've had time to think about this god, and we know you'll make it work. In particular I like the very Greek-esque inception of a god that leaks in when it's mentioned that Urhu runs around disguised as a mortal and expects hospitality. I wish there was more to say but there really isn't; it's just a nice sheet and I have no real objections. Accepted. Well done; I don't even have any suggestions. [/hider]