[@thedman] Our first psychic boi! Jared has a consistent voice and a strong motivator in his story from his brother. In terms of notes, I'd be interested to see his sheet describe more of what 'psionic potential' is in the context of Daedalus's understanding, as well as see a bit more of his thoughts on what's been done to him and what he's become.

[@NorthernKraken] I love, love, [i]love[/i] how you formatted this sheet [s]and may steal it and remake Emmeline's like that at some point[/s]! Kieran is a great character as well - I'll cut to the fact that I have no real notes and get to the next one because I'm already late on these.

[@Naive1]

A very interesting take on a classic monster! I especially love the implication that some aspects of her condition are the results of a creator going off the Daedalus rails. Not so much in the way of notes, but if you wanted to take another pass and add more I think it'd be interesting to see more of how the other researchers think of his... project. Again, not a 'you must do this' note, just my writer brain going 'cool story idea'!

[@Serendipity] Very well realized idea that I hadn't even considered; the notion of a person who might consider them self to be chosen by Daedalus, rather than victimized by it, as it seems she does. Again, not much in the way of notes, keeping in mind the PM you sent me (I so love delicious secrets).

Again, if I have a suggestion, it doesn't necessarily mean you have to take it, or that you won't get in if you don't, they're just my thoughts. Thank you all so much for applying and showing your interest and being so invested in this idea! I already know that choosing is going to be a nightmare task, and without even considering specific characters, I've decided to raise the number of players from five to six - a not-insignificant part of my heart wants to raise it higher, but I think it best for the cohesion of the narrative that it stays there. I made this change because I wasn't expecting the amount of interest and effort that this idea would garner, and as a result I've adjusted the number. Tomorrow I'll start looking at revised sheets. For now, I sleep.