[@Frettzo] for Li'Kalla
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I like your character a lot! More than any of Astarte's iterations, honestly. There's some stuff going on here, and while parts are quite simple everything seems overall good.

Your Portfolio is concise and effective. There's not much to say beyond that it's good. With great deluges of rain you could perhaps erode canyons and do all sorts of cool things in the first few turns.

The So'E is also a neat Sphere. It has a clear, relevant, and tangible effect upon Galbar. Not much is going on inside of it save for Li'Kalla having a house and a bunch of rainclouds forming, but for now that's okay because the imagery fits, you have a good skeleton, and more can always be done IC.

Regarding personality, you've chosen the sort of character that will require proactive writing to do things; hopefully you intend to be appropriately forward n developing Li'Kalla and showing some personality change. That segues nicely into my next point: some of the GMs thought it worth waving a warning flag here. Be careful as you approach the mature themes like self-harm and depression; Divinus has a mature enough audience and setting  to handle it, but just try to tread the topic lightly as you go through with it. This was the only potentially objectionable thing about your sheet.

Well done!

Sheet approved with just a little warning flag waving![/hider]