[@Tsukai] The post is honestly fine, don't worry so much, I think you may be putting too much pressure on yourself. As long as it's clear enough and gets things moving it's fine. This isn't some Advanced and beyond RP, we're not going to come down on you with mad pressure and strict expectations xD So long as you get the post out and it moves things, that's honestly good enough for us

Edit: I suppose this could apply to anyone else also. So far everyone's posts have been very good.