This is my review of the current submitted characters and I'd like to see if [@Lumiere] has any thoughts about them. Once that has been done, the judgment will be passed.

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[@A Lowly Wretch]

I feel like your character would be recruited by Kazzok instead of being thrown in a jail cell. Especially since she didn't fight his forces at all.

[@ShwiggityShwah]

Looks good to me.

[@Veradana]

This too.

[@Eisenhorn]

They're both good though I prefer Lash since she'll fit better in the story.

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Also, I love how you all have problems with your character sheets. ;)