[@Chiro]its good, but there are a few things to tweak. We changed up the cs, adding in a personality section and getting rid of 
why your character should be in a position to influence the country.

Also Sheriffs were part of the royal court and acted in the kings name. They would be the ones who did the collecting of rent and taxes. It's a nobleman position in this age.  

also the last war was 30 years ago. So she would be too young. perhaps learned fighting from Sebastian? If you can make those changes we would appreciate it

also that song is a nice addition!