[@Experiment 249]
-cracks knuckles-
Okay, stuff handled, let's check this out.

1. Abilities are definitely scaled way too high for what the char's level is. The gear seems like an endgame set, not a midgame set. This, I am sure of. Too many bonuses. All of these bonuses.

What the heck, nerf that. I'd slap the dev who came up with this if they proposed this as any sense of 'balanced'.

2. First paragraph of Backstory section. Wrong game buddy-o.

3. Looping back to abilities (under the assumption that we handle literally everything gear related because seriously what the heck), well...
Eladrin seems like it's got too much going for it. Remove.
Fey Step remove.
Dancer's Fog is okay assuming the character doesn't suddenly have a max HP buff since it's a HoT and not burst heal. I'm also working under the assumption that because it's fog, it lowers visibility as a tradeoff?
Dryad is fine.
Fairy Swarm is fine.
Mirror Image is fine.

4. XP as compared to combat experience? Because in an RPG of any sort, you'll get EXP to get levels. I think that should be clarified.

5. Size is fine, you can shrink more if you want. Just don't be unreasonable.

That's all for now. I think. I'll let you know more if you change more.