Right; so, [@Inkarnate] put me in charge of reviews while he works on pushing out the time skip post. These reviews do not mean you're accepted, rather, they're what I think could be fixed or improved on.

[@ghastlyInc] First and foremost, there is the issue of Shun's height and weight. Normally, I wouldn't be so frisked in regards to such matters, yet Shun is well... to put it bluntly, a rarity in Japan. [url=http://nbakki.hatenablog.com/entry/2014/05/26/192451]This link[/url] and [url=http://nbakki.hatenablog.com/entry/2014/05/28/122924]this link[/url] may be of assistance to you.

Secondly, as mentioned before, there is somewhat of an overlap with recently accepted characters, however, I do think that either of the ideas you suggested earlier in this thread could be a fix for why he stopped karate. That being said, him being in karate and liking roleplaying games is a bit [i]too close[/i] to Manami, another recently accepted character, though I suppose the two of you could probably work something out regarding that.

Finally, regarding his backstory (the party girl/stepfather/uncle/aunt/etc segments), I do feel that you could add more regarding how Shun feels about it. Incidents such as stepparents/children/siblings and party girls/boys are rather taboo in Japan, more so than they would be in a western country like the US.

[@Noodles] For Keisuke, however, there wasn't much that I had issue with. 

For starters, I do need you to trim down his list of hobbies. The defining hobby section means 1 (one) hobby that shines over all, and having talked with Inkarnate, smoking wouldn't fit as a hobby. That would leave you with either Basketball or the Arcade to choose from, unless you decide on something different.

Regarding his parents' work, I'm somewhat confused as to where they work. Throughout the sheet, you mention three different places: a) a drink stall, b) a convenience stall, and c) a cigarette stall. Which one is it? A drink stall is likely a convenience stall (or store, it's a little odd that they manage a stall rather than a store). I'm not sure convenience stalls/stores in Japan sell cigarettes, however, but I did find some information that they have specialized stores (and even vending machines, though you need a special card for them) that you can buy tobacco products from.

Other than that, whilst I do feel it is a bit barebones in terms of content, I do feel that it could potentially be accepted, depending on what Inkarnate sees of it.

EDIT: I did forget something--if you could choose a color hexcode for Keisuke, that would be appreciated.

Now, for a thing not related to reviews:

[@Pandapolio][@Alexfangtalon] Not to bother you two or anything, but I was curious on your status in this roleplay. I know that we're waiting on Inkarnate to post the time skip, but the two of you haven't really said much as of late in the OOC and the Discord, and I wanted to know if the two of you were still here for this.