[@Goldeagle1221][@Scarifar] I apologise if my introduction arc is a bit underwhelming! Seihdhara is indeed a mighty martial lady, but she also lives in the moment. Therefore my plot decisions have been very in the moment also. I have purposefully refrained from overplanning, focusing instead on her themes - her joy, the importance of her hair, etc. I also enjoy building up the small and seemingly irrelevant aspects of a character or their previous actions or events that have happened to them. So during her entrance she appears to have lost parts of her soul and her hair also. These have impacted the decisions she has made so far but have also had a tangible effect on her physical form - its weakness etc. It is a character and story development arc. If the way I have gone about it has bewildered you and others or is not to the liking of everybody, then I am deeply apologetic.