Haha, yeah, advantage was that once you said you liked the idea, I just started writing it in my head, and when I saw the CS, I went from there. Being a veteran rper and a long time writer has its perks. But yeah, I can make edits as needed. It'll probably be a bit slow today, since coming off an illness, since that's never fun. Just lemme know what changes to make, alright? Wanna make sure it fits the setting as best able!