[quote=@Lugubrious] Geez that's a lot of text! And that first part just over the cutoff, too. I guess the breakdown would be 3 for Bowser and Mario from the collab, 1 extra for Mario for the followup, and 3 more for Geno because of the prelude. [/quote] Damn das alotta [s]spaghetti[/s] points for Geno. Will add them in accordingly. [quote=@Lugubrious] The two of you might consider a less-is-more approach starting sometime soon, going for quality (things like using the active voice, no typos, and fixing grammatical mistakes) over quantity. Conciseness is a valuable trait. [/quote] I'm a very detail-oriented person, so this is normal to me, however I will definitely consider using that mindset for future posts - especially now that I have 2 characters under my belt.