[@Aleranicus] To clarify: Is your second hider intended to be your public character sheet? It will need trimmed if so, but I like it overall. It's in a bit of an awkward position where it's [i]too much[/i] info for what's expected from a public sheet, but too little for the private character sheet (Which should be PM'd to me. I realize I did not specify clearly and have edited the post.)

Overall: I dig it, I'll be asking for some clarifications once you have the private version in my inbox, but aside from length issues the character(s) will very likely be accepted more or less as-is.

Also, when I say too little for the private sheet, I'm not commenting on length so much as content. It should very much be where the GMs know her goals, history, and other info to help weave into the story.