Oh, the only thing I would comment on is this: since you are leading with the abduction scene, you will have to start with a time skip of sorts, a [i]Two weeks later...[/i] Since not all the characters will have been chumming around the capitol. Several people are from frontier areas, and wouldnt have a reason to be in the capitol, others might have been previously deployed prior to this event. In short, enough time will have to have passed for a rider to cover the ground from the furthest edges of the kingdom to report for the meeting.

I guess otherwise it looks good and as I said I liked the scene between the princess and the dragon.