[@Eviledd1984]

Outside of issues with adhering to the formatting of the sheet, there’s actually a lot of issues me and Maxx seemed to recognize. 

I can summarize this into several key points:

[indent][b]Tone. [/b]Your character is not written as a protagonist or even a deuteragonist. While characters who can be typified as “edgy” are more than acceptable for the cast, they need to [i]inherently[/i] good-natured and have the ability to mesh with the character roster. This means having a sociability, even if they at times can be confrontational or disliked. The people who treat the chaos of their new existence and new consequences as a means to be a worse person than they were are more suitable to enemies for the cast to overcome rather than being comrades-in-arms.

[b]Incomplete Application. [/b]There are missing or invalid fields. You list only one domain, suggest a profession like raider (which I honestly don’t see how it could be a profession in-game), list an incomplete array of benchmarks, and so forth.

[b]Invalid Appearance. [/b]People in Pariah Online do not design an avatar, they are represented by their inner self and psychology. I find a pale-faced, vampire-fanged ghoul to be not something that makes a lot of sense and I’m not particularly keen in accepting it. I’ve accepted gender changes, age changes, and some minor things, but I think this one is a whole different level that isn’t appropriate for what I am looking for.[/indent]
So with that noted, I’m just going to have to reject the application. I’m sorry.