[@eclecticwitch] So I have quite a few problems with this character. If I were to be entirely honest, I was totally fine with her until I got to the backstory section. Her backstory is really... over the top, don't you think? I know I kind of have the worst habit of giving my characters the worst backstories ever, but hers doesn't make any sense. And by that I mean her past is so bad that it doesn't line up with her personality, and to match up with her personality... I imagine she'd be some PTSD riddled wreck that probably wouldn't function in society (or look good as she does). I kinda get what you were going for, but I don't think it all adds up. I do so the potential of fixing her backstory so that it does add up, but it requires removing a lot of her sexual trauma and all the friends dying to ODing. I mean, seriously, this shit leads to [i]lifetimes[/i] of mental trauma.

Also how does she really look so good? Even former heroine addicts look like shit.

Now, onto her power... which probably isn't as much of sticking point for me as her backstory but still has a few problems. My big thing is that it sounds like a Contrivance Superpower which is one thing I want to avoid in the RP, especially this one. I'm okay with her being able to pull a set of clearly defined weapons out of her space (Though I'm wondering where she gets them from? lol) but basically being able to pull whatever she wants out? Yeah, no. One way to do this is that she's able to transport objects in the same plane as her through time and space itself to herself and the closer it is, the faster she can do it. Her super strength is literally just tacked onto the rest of her powerset and I don't think, with how strong and versatile her power is right.

Her weaknesses and limits are also kind of... eh. Basically, for her weakness, that her power has a chance to be inconsistent? But what decides when it's inconsistent? Weaknesses like that are usually never really a detriment I observed. I mean you can give me control over it, but idk if you want do that. And I mean, her power has the potential to be pretty broken so I want some solid limits and weaknesses. Also being able to keep an object in this universe for two hours isn't long enough to make a difference lol