[@Ruler Inc] Okay, I added and changed things.  Please let me know what else I can do!  I have just put it in my previous post.  I can repost if you like. :)

EDIT Actually, I made her a bit younger too.

Another edit:  This is in regards to a point you made in your corrections statement.  Sexual abuse in childhood can manifest in a few different ways.  Her proclivity for sexual activity is one of those ways.

Final edit, promise:  I am more than happy to let you dictate what comes through the Void!  it will make it more fun for me that way.  That is if you are willing.

There, I hope I addressed everything!