Rare, it's not the picture Shelton had a problem with (although you could have found a better one lol) It's your sentence structure and awkward use of Grammer in a casual level game. Serious question: Is English your second language? And if it isn't then how old are you?

On the plus side, role playing greatly improves your reading/writing comprehension so I would tell you to keep at it even if you aren't accepted here. I know It did for me. I used to be rejected from Advanced games all the time.