[b]Below are some comments on the CS' posted so far, even the WIP. Nobody is accepted yet but for awareness i'm really happy with the variation between the real world players and their avatar alter-ego's. Very strong collection of characters so far.[/b] [hr] [@Hellion] I really like the idea. I just want to make clear that hacking in The Universe is entirely impossible. However there is still an internet, corporate networks etc so she can utilise her skills in those areas. Love the avatar (Mass Effect fans are welcome :lol). • Decoy: My character has a similar ability and it is listed as Common. The rest of the items seem good. [hr] [@Vocab] solid character you've created here. The only thing i'd say is the limit for weapons is meant to be three but as long as you make clear what you have during each "mission" then its not so much an issue. Also, in terms of the Shaed, i'm entirely unfamiliar with the books. Just so I understand it has the capability to reduce damage and turn her invisible? If she makes herself invisible, as in she's covered head to toe, can she still operate weapons or abilities? [hr] [@Drippy] wonderful choice of an avatar! Everything seems fine from what I can see. You still have room for more utilities if you wish. If not it's no biggy. There will be opportunities for more items once we get going. [hr] [@Briza] I was waiting for the first "opposite" character to appear. Would be interesting to see how that would play out. What you have so far there is fine so far. [hr] [@Artifex] A parkour runner would have a field day in London :lol Everythings looking good there so far. [hr] [@KiwiHalcyon] Can't go wrong with a bit of R6: Siege inspiration! Everything there is good.