[@Aeolian] How much do you think the shield can take before it gets shattered?

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[quote=@DocRock]While one could go through the usual tales of just where this kid came from, its a story most will know by this point, so we'll gloss over the more darker parts, save for the tales to come.[/quote]

I don't get this part... this is something I believe should be elaborated on rather than just glossing pass it. Unless you plan on revealing it in IC which is fine.

[quote=@DocRock]
Unlike most versions, Serene knows exactly every major detail of her family history. Her grandfather being a lunatic who nearly ruined everything for the dark side of their fortune, to her father being the reason the mad scientist Doctor Metal met..a mysterious end, and so on. She knows this, and wears the tattoo of House Drakos with pride, the eastern dragon that strikes fear into the heart of those who know just how deep the black money goes. Despite this, she has no actual handling of the family's black fortune, preferring to keep her fingers clean for the moment.[/quote]

I thiiiiiiiiink this is vague and ill-defined... I think you should better explain this paragraph to us since we're not familiar to the character or the lore you thought of for them. What is House Drakos? Why are there "Houses" in 2019? lol


[quote=@DocRock] It wasn't that her father feared them, but rather, he respected them, having been forced to kill more than a few in his career, and fight alongside still more[/quote]

So wait, is her father Professor Drake or Doctor Metal?

[quote=@DocRock]Of course this was what what Serene wanted. In this case, she dipped her fingers into the darkside, pulling a few strings via her grandmother's connections, to acquire the materials needed. After careful testing to confirm the serum worked, Serene had herself injected with the serum of a type-blue.[/quote]

I'm going to have to talk to you about the serums in private because the serums are a whole new can of worms.


[quote=@DocRock]or even merge pieces of technology together to complete one task. [/quote]

How does this work? Does she like gain the technological knowledge to pull it off or..? And how can she, going off her quotes, manifest fists and shit?

[quote=DocRock]Green/Blue[/quote]


Let's not.
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[@Maxx] Change his name to Gay Jackov and he's accepted.