[@Ruler Inc]
The reason I noted green/blue was mainly because I couldn't recall which was the actual eye color for the FC. As for merging, it would require her to actually understand both pieces, and take the time needed to merge them, which really just means connecting them together and hoping they work. I can, however, remove that with ease. Professor Drake is her dad, Doctor Metal the bad guy. Sorry if that wasn't too clear. As for bio details overall regarding glossed over stuff, I was going to cover that in actual rp, to avoid spoilers if needed. I can change house to family, its just a term to refer to the blacker side of the family business. With serums, I can fix that up, the impression you gave me on Discord awhile back was that the serums worked fine, but if there's a big issue, I can adjust that, to say having her be a naturally born metahuman, or found a way to gain powers safely. As for the fists, that was more tongue in cheek, as being able to well, generate something like that would require more training than she had at that point in the biography. If having that as a statement that isn't yet indicative of IC stuff is an issue, I can replace it to something else, perhaps referencing something else that could make a person shit themselves.

If you'd like, we ca always move this to Discord to talk more at length. I'm fine with changing or elaborating as needed. Truth be told, I was running on fumes when I wrote that up last night, so me missing something, big or small, isn't too surprising. I just wanted to get the initial version up, so you could tear it apart and I repair accordingly. You tore it up a lot less than I expected, but enough to give me clear areas to work with. Like I said, if certain things are major enough an issue, I'm completely fine with rewriting entire sections as needed. If there's something else you said that I somehow failed to address, whoops. Thanks for the feedback though.