[hider=Briza's Vote]
[hider=William McDougal][@Calle], I really enjoy his profession. He is by far the strongest out of all the characters presented for the circumstances. Although a little run of the mill with his backstory (I say this gently), it is appreciated. My curiosity would be how he reacts to all the characters who come in-and-out of the generational-owned Saloon. If I was the GM. I would have definitely accepted him and asked him to be moved over to the Character Tab. However, I would add that you should clean up some of the awkward line-error spacing (that omgosh, happens to me sometimes, too).[/hider]

[hider=Kathryn E. Gamble][@Gwynbleidd], I liked your description of Kathryn and the stylistic writing you used to introduce her to the audience. I can imagine her very well even if in a mysterious sort of way, which goes alongside her profession. She has a pretty tragic life story, and I wonder what her actual thoughts about her status in society are and how it will play out especially given the current murders that are happening. Out of all the entries, yours was the most fluid and therefore, easiest to read. As I told Calle, if I was the GM, I would have definitely accepted her and asked her to be moved over to the Character Tab. [/hider]

[hider=Theodora Shockley][@ayzrules], I am shock by how gossip-central your character is. (Lol?) Anyways, Theodora seems like a hoot and a half to have around town. You got some smiles out of me. I am curious as to how she would get along with William at the Saloon. There was something sloppy about the way it was written. The only rhyme or reason I have for the disorderliness is from all the backtracking commentary to explain her persona and backstory. Nonetheless, as I told the other two contestants, if I was the GM, I would have definitely accepted her and asked her to be moved over to the Character Tab.[/hider]

And, without further ado:

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