[@Andreyich]
Just one thing; fix the image, chum. I know that’s a nitpick but I have to consistent. If you can’t find a different picture/image to your liking let me know and I’ll see if I can run that current image through an animation app I have.
Other than that, your set! Nice to have a “blue-collar boy” along.

[@Kazemitsu]
Edits needed, mate. Different image please. Also, and please don’t think I’m trying to bully you with this, but you need to in truth to redo your character. Near completely. A god-level deep voice... mmmm...
A blacksmith? In the twenty-first century? On an island resort?
Please start over from scratch, as harsh as that sounds.