[@AardWolf] As a general note, the average height of a Japanese woman (full grown adult) is something like 5'2. Emu is well above average, in that case. To confirm, she didn't start working at a convenience store when she was 10, right? Outside of that though, there's a whole buncha stuff I can use there, so that's good. If you could touch up on the run-on sentences you have in the CS, that'd improve readability as well. Also, I'll be making the landlord a character as well, just so you're aware. Dude seems prominent enough to at least be named and all.

Can't wait to start figuring out how to build a reconciliation between Emu and her hot mom. ;3

[@Asuras]Motherfuckers with their missing dads and their dead moms. Did she ever do any hard drugs, by the way? Or did she distance herself from her group before things got too wild and edgy? Anyways, her life's inoffensive enough that I'm basically fine with it. Can't go without a convenience store in town, after all. When's she gonna see the light and start vaping?

[@Canidae]If you have trouble with getting pictures posted up, just upload the picture to imgur and use the link from there. I know that a buncha sites don't allow for hotlinking and all, so that's probably what the problem is. Drama with the old friends group's always useful though, and its definitely nice that Damien is both a guy AND a relatively social person. Sets up the contrast n all. Anyways, I'll wait till you finish up your backstory before thinking more about it. In regards to the final NPC, it's always fine to come up with enemies rather than family or friends.

And really, for locations, it doesn't need to be like, the top 3 places they frequent the most. I'd be pretty worried if the only place that a socialite punk biker goes to is a park, a street, and the parking lot of a restaurant. Where's his edgeeeeeeee.