[@Tal] Sounds all good to me. You've got a pretty good character design and can consider it accepted. In reviewing your sheet, the general consensus was that your being vague on what justice is actually supposed to be is fine, because you're trying to explore that IC. It looks like you'll have plenty to do and write about between that and creating Ya-Shuur and then in perhaps having him try to ascend to godhood. BBeast noted that we get an idea of Ya-Shuur's philosophy and values, but not really his temperament or demeanor, or any quirks. Those small details would be nice to have in your sheet, but beyond that, I've got no criticisms of substance. Well done and welcome aboard!