[hider=Bryethe Farlance] [hider=OoC] [u][b] 🔷As a player, what is your preferred writing level? [/b][/u] 🔸Several paragraphs 🔸Long stories with heavy collaboration [u][b] 🔷Is grammar and depth of writing important to you? [/b][/u] 🔸Extremely. I always look forward to reading about how other characters feel in the moment, and what they're thinking. Depth of writing is something I love, and something I'm working on myself. [u][b] 🔷Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring? [/b][/u] 🔸Siblings bonds are my favorite, but in the case of the Star Wars PG, I love to explore the bonds between other characters. Writing about those bonds is one of my favorite things to do. [u][b] 🔷Is there anything you [i]really[/i] dislike and want to avoid like the plague? [/b][/u] 🔸Romance. Something I've never enjoyed, nor tried at all. Willing to, but only if it's natural between characters. [u][b] 🔷Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character? [/b][/u] 🔸Romance... Just not feelin' it unless it's natural, even then it'll take some time for me to get used to. [u][b] 🔷Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character? [/b][/u] 🔸Short Term: Explore the bond between Brye's second master, Satele, see how their bond was formed and how they can grow to learn from each other. || Create new character friendships/rivalries. || Help myself get comfortable writing in a Star Wars RP. I love Star Wars, but I've never had the awesome opportunity to join in a Star Wars RP! 🔸Long Term: Become a Jedi Knight, perhaps even take on a Padawan? This goes with the curiosity of writing a Padawan who will soon start to focus on going through the Jedi Trials. || Create long-lasting and strong character relationships. || Use Brye to help myself become more comfortable with writing combat scenes. I'm excited to write them but a little nervous I won't be able to get my thoughts across properly. || Challenge myself, writing wise, and grow to become super comfortable with my character and be proud of my writing. 💟 [/hider] [hider=Jedi Temple Public Records] [b] 🔷Name: [/b] 🔸Bryethe Farlance [b] 🔷Species: [/b] 🔸Human (Corellian) [b] 🔷Age: [/b] 🔸18 (Born 10.20.12 BTC) [b] 🔷Homeworld: 🔸Corellia[/b] [b] 🔷Gender: [/b] 🔸Female [b] 🔷Rank: [/b] 🔸Padawan Learner [b] 🔷Master: [/b] 🔸Jedi Grandmaster Satele Shan (Together from ages 16-18) [b] 🔷Former master(s): [/b] 🔸Jedi Knight Rularrn Lonn (Together from ages 11-16) 🔸🔹 Praxeum Instructor and her only former master. [b]🔷Trials Completed: [/b] 🔸Trial of Courage 🔸Trial of Insight [u][b] 🔷Known Skills: [/b][/u] [hider=Known Lighstaber Forms] Form III: Soresu || Advanced Form V: Shien || Intermediate. [/hider]🔸Is quick and light on her feet, allowing for proper use of both Soresu and Shien. 🔸Is cautious when making decisions, allowing her to think through her actions and their consequences before committing. 🔸Listens well to her Master. Takes constructive criticism well, seems to learn well from her mistakes and misfortunes. 🔸Due to her strong knowledge of Soresu, and part knowledge of Shien, she has grown strong in terms of maintaining a solid defense for an extended amount of time. Has impressive stamina and endurance, allowing herself to how a defensive line in battle, or last out against an enemy of equal or lesser skill. Always needs improvement in this, is constantly working to improve her endurance as she realizes how vital it is to Soresu and Shien. [u][b] 🔷Trained Force Techniques: [/b][/u] 🔸Basic Jedi Techniques || Has grown to focus on the Force, utilizing it, more than average, during combat and in use to help with movement about her environment. 🔸🔹Strengths lie in: 🔸[b]Intermediate Training[/b] Telekinesis || 🔸[b]Intermediate Training[/b] Force Throw || [u]**[/u]Uses a healthy mix of lightsaber combat and Force techniques when she fights. Prefers to use the Force as an offense as Brye usually stays defensive when fighting with her saber. 🔸[b]Intermediate Training[/b] Force Sight || Has always shown an understanding for paying attention to her surroundings and using her environment to her advantage. 🔸[b]Basic Training/Novice[/b] Force Sense || [u]**See above.[/u] 🔸[b]Intermediate Training[/b] Force Jump || [u]**See above.[/u] 🔸[b]Intermediate Training[/b] Precognition || 🔸[b]Basic Training/Novice[/b] Tutaminis || Wants to work towards become more skillful with this. 🔸[b]Intermediate Talent[/b] Droid Disable || When spare time allows, and when not training or meditating, Brye enjoys to tinker to a certain extent. She finds droids fascinating at certain times and wishes to learn as much as she can in her free time. 🔸[b]Undiscovered Talent[/b] Crucitorn || 🔸🔹((OOC: I wanted to include an interest for my character that I myself might not usually go for. I feel like this is one such opportunity!)) [u][b] 🔷Known associates:[/b][/u] 🔸Jedi Padawan Jaslyn Dayne || Jaslyn is felt as a sister to Brye. They grew up together, training as Younglings, Initiates, and now Padawans. Brye is very critical of Jaslyn's decisions as they are usually more reckless than she'd appreciate. 🔸Jedi Padawan San Anin || 🔸Jedi Knight Rularrn Lonn || Former Master, was killed while they were both on an assignment together. 🔸Captain Nimat’ualin || Not friends, nor enemies either. Brye and Nima have had a few run-ins with each other, all ending in stalemates as a few required the two to work together, while other's forced Brye to choose the welfare of others over Nimat'ualin's capture and arrest. 🔸Roana, Mandolorian || [u][b] 🔷Favored Equipment and clothes: [/b][/u] 🔸Utility belt: Holds her lightsaber, food capsules, holomap/holoprojector, grappling spike launcher, Jedi beacon transceiver, and a Jedi breathing mask. 🔸On the gauntlet on her left wrist, she wears a comlink, which allows her to communicate even during a battle, as she wields her lightsaber in her left hand, leaving her right to utilize the comlink's few controls. 🔸She wears lightly padded, white-colored armor over her chest, shoulders, lower arm and upper thigh. 🔸Wears a dark brown under-tunic that covers her waist to her shoulders. 🔸Wears a dark brown over-tunic, and a reddish-brown tabard with a straight-cut bottom. [hider=Clothing Reference Picture] [img]https://i.imgur.com/LdXH60e.jpg[/img] [/hider] 🔸Brye's new lightsaber. [hider=Laser sword] [img]https://i.imgur.com/sRBtgC0.jpg[/img] [/hider] [u][b] 🔷Personality type: [/b][/u] 🔸Quiet, Reserved, and Cautious. 🔸🔹Brye tends to remain in the shadows, listening to others and taking in information. She is cautious when making decisions, which is one of her weaknesses. Is very loyal and willing to help her Master whenever possible. Despite being rather reserved and quiet, Brye is not one to be taken advantage of. She has strong bonds with those she holds close to her. She holds a strong sense of duty to the Jedi Order, and does not easily fold to mind-tricks and manipulative talk. 🔸 Mischievious, and loves to tinker. 🔸🔹 Before becoming a Padawan, it took Brye a long time to grow out of her mischievious mindset. She and an old friend, Neith, would constantly get into trouble while training at their Temple; starting silly rumors, such as the one where they convinced other Younglings that Dark Force spirits lived in dirty socks, and often re-wiring droids to fetch snacks and talk backwards. 🔸🔹Brye loves to figure out how droids work, often taking apart droids who need servicing and putting them back together, even though they just need [i]servicing[/i]. When time allows, Brye can be found in her quarters, researching droid schematics and looking up the most recent updates to droids used both by the Republic, and in battle. [u][b] 🔷Known Flaws: [/b][/u] 🔸[color=0072bc]**[/color]Was unable to control her emotions when she was a Youngling. (see [color=0072bc]Major Failures on Record[/color] for correlation.) 🔸🔹Due to this, Brye had constantly been on watch for issues with her emotions. The incident with her former Master was looked as acceptable behavior for her emotions, but had issues when she was younger. She made a close friend and needed help coming out of her grief when she had thought that friend died. She has been doing better with control in the near two years that she's been under Satele's eye. 🔸Bryethe is very cautious, and sometimes lacks confidence in herself. Sometimes her fiery spirit balances this flaw out. Although it sometimes causes issues on assignments where her lack of confidence in herself stalls the mission, puts more danger on to Brye or others than necessary, or makes Brye doubt herself when full concentration is needed. 🔸Constantly on the defensive. Strengths lie in Soresu, so she prefers to wear an enemy down than make a powerful strike. Good endurance and stamina but if she is up against a powerful enemy, her lack of offense could prove extremely unfavorable. [/hider] [hider=Jedi Temple Internal Records] [h3][sub]🔷Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.[/sub][/h3] [hider=Bryethe Farlance][img]https://i.imgur.com/rxq2knp.jpg[/img][/hider] *Small scar on lower left jawline. Recieved from a glance with a lightsaber during the fight in which her first Master was killed. [h3][sub]🔷Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.[/sub][/h3] [hider=Voice Logs] 🔸[i][indent]Author: Nala Morso, Jedi Watchman Subject: Bryethe Farlance Date: 18:00, 30.10.09 [15 years ago] We've had to instruct Bryethe to use her lightsaber more during training sessions. She seems to want to use other objects more in defense of herself rather than her lightsaber. She seems to understand the idea of deflection with her saber, but prefers to utilize the Force more during combat. This could benefit her in the long run, but we will have to make sure she understands she cannot completely rely on the Force for everything that she does. [/indent][/i] [/hider] [h3][sub]🔷Report on skills not directly rooted in the Force, including level of skill.[/sub][/h3] [hider=Voice Logs] 🔸[i][indent]Author: Nala Morso, Jedi Watchman Subject: Bryethe Farlance Date: 15:00, 02.02.08 BTC [14 years ago] Youngling Brye seems to be very good on her feet. She's demonstrated multiple times to us that she is very nimble and good at using her environment to her advantage. She enjoys acrobatics, perhaps a little too much. She hasn't caught on yet, but it would be quite difficult to catch her should she choose to stay off the ground. She is very good at paying attention to her surroundings. She likes to use different objects to leap and bound from, and was even seen throwing up dust the other day in defense during a small skirmish with another Youngling. Seems to understand that she doesn't have to remain grounded during a fight, or while simply moving from one place to another.[/indent][/i] [center]🔷🔷🔷[/center] 🔸[i][indent]Author: Nala Morso, Jedi Watchman Subject: Bryethe Farlance Date: 09:00, 23.05.08 [14 years ago] Youngling Brye has shown impressive agility and coordination. Not just with her lightsaber, but in moving around her environment, even more so than three months ago. In her free time, she enjoys running about the garden and getting the other Younglings to try to catch her. She seems to be able to think ahead and predict her next movement well, allowing herself to get the upperhand on her opponent. We'll have to see if she keeps interest in this.[/indent][/i] 🔸Very athletic. Brye tends to be able to scale obstacles and cover distance better than a few other Padawan of her age. 🔸Very attentive. Brye usually catches herself subconsciously taking note of her surroundings. Every ledge, branch, large rock, doorway or window, Brye tries to keep it all in her head should she need to jump into action, whether it be combat or otherwise. [/hider] [h3][sub]🔷Report on known combat experience, training and lightsaber training.[/sub][/h3] [hider=Voice Logs] 🔸[i][indent]Author: Rularnn Lonn, Jedi Knight Subject: Bryethe Farlance Date: 09:00, 19.09.03 [9 years ago] Youngling Brye seems to have gravitated the most towards Soresu during her training. Despite receiving provisional training in all five forms, the focuses the most on Soresu. I've tried to push her into incorporating one of the other more offensive forms, but she is extremely comfortable with Soresu, and utilizing the Force when needed to compensate for gaps in her defenses.[/indent][/i][/hider] Since the Treaty of Coruscant was signed six years ago, Brye hasn't seen much in terms of heavy combat. She's been training for combat for the last six years should something come up, but in terms of participating in any, she's only been in small battles and skirmishes. [h3][sub]🔷Detailed notes on political influence and associates. [/sub][/h3] 🔸None as of yet. [h3][sub]🔷Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies, outside and within the Order and Republic.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Nimat'ualin 🔸🔹Brye and Nima have had several run ins together, all ending in stale-mates for one reason or another. Bryethe doesn't know what to think of Nima, as there have been times they've helped each other, but also times they've fought each other. She's still trying to figure things out. [h3][sub]🔷List and description of other known associates, including intimates.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Helea Neith Arundhati 🔸🔹 The only other person Brye has known that she would regard as a "sister." The two were extremely close. Close enough to warrant action from the Jedi Masters at the Arkania praxeum. The two were deliberately separated multiple times, but their relationship as "sisters" was not easily broken. Helea's "death" was the cause of emotional turmoil within Brye; enough to require guidance to get over her grief. 🔸Jedi Knight Rularnn Lonn 🔸🔹 Brye's previous Master, Lonn himself a Jedi Knight. He died two years prior in an incident involving rogue Sith. One that nearly cost Brye her own life as well. 🔸Jedi Grand Master Satele Shan 🔸🔹 Brye's current Master. Someone the young Jedi looks up to in all aspects. It was Satele who was one of the first to respond to the incident which killed her Master. Master Satele helped fight off the rogue Sith, and helped Bryethe get out with her life. Taking Brye under her wing, the young Jedi was quickly given someone to fall back on while dealing with the grief of losing her Master, and quickly was pushed to focus on healing and jumping full force into training. Brye quickly found a reason to better herself after the incident, and has been learning much from Master Satele during the two years since it happened. [h3][sub]🔷List of all known ownerships, including vessels, (non-standard) equipment, and locations.[/sub][/h3] 🔸None as of yet. [h3][sub]🔷Psychological evaluation of Jedi Order member.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Taken into the Order at the age of two, Bryethe quickly fell into the ways of the Jedi Order and caught on very quickly. She grew up eager to learn, her willingness to learn being reflected in her successful studies and the eventual passing of the Initiate Trials. Brye is very level-headed. After learning to control her emotions after the passing of a fellow Initiate, Brye is very skilled at maintaining focus on and off the battlefield. To a point, she enjoys the thrill of battle, but also enjoys her down-time away from the field, taking any time she can to study from Holocrons or work on droids and machinery. After the incident, Bryethe tries to enjoy her life a little more than she had before. Taking in her environment is something Brye loves. Sitting on a high point and watching the sun set or rise, taking in a breeze; allowing herself to enjoy life for a brief moment. Brye follows Satele closely, sticking to her Master mission after mission unless told otherwise. She's constantly watching, listening, and learning, the eagerness from her childhood never having waivered through her Padawan years. [h3][sub]🔷List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into restricted database.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Personality 🔸🔹Has learned to control her emotions, but is afraid that she may not be able to keep control over them forever. 🔸🔹Is overly cautious, which may sometimes lead Brye to lack confidence if she thinks for too long on her decisions or their outcomes. 🔸Combat 🔸🔹Is comfortable staying on the defensive, has trouble taking the initiative and making the first offensive strike. Has taught herself good endurance and stamina but sometimes fails to see where constant defense isn't enough to win a fight. 🔸🔹Being overly cautious can also affect her on the battlefield, which can stall the mission, put more danger on to Brye or others than necessary, or makes Brye doubt herself when full concentration is needed. [h3][sub]🔷Major achievements on record.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Successfully constructed her first lightsaber. 🔸Completed Initiate Trials. 🔸Survived the incident that took her former Master's life. [h3][sub]🔷Major failures on record. Confidential.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Beaten in a Padawan lightsaber tournament in the early rounds. 🔸[color=0072bc]**[/color]Developed strong emotional attachment to a fellow Initiate. Needed guidance to get over said attachment. The relationship was not romantic, but she and Neith grew very close, and treated each other like siblings. [hider=Interview] [h3][sub]🔷Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in Jedi archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.[/sub][/h3] 🔸Bryethe Farlance was born on Corellia on 10.20.12 BTC. She displayed knowledge of the Force at age two, and was quickly taken to the Jedi praxeum on Arkania to be trained. Brye has no recollection of her parents, nor has really ever asked about them. Growing up, Brye encountered many trials and tribulation. She formed a sisterly bond with another Padawan, then went through immense guilt when said Padawan was reported dead later in her years. Losing her Master in a skirmish with two treasonous Sith, she was rescued and taken under Jedi Grand Master Satele Shan's wing. In the current year, Brye isn't far from needing to turn focus to her Knight Trials, but is also still learning a lot about the universe; the war, politics, and overall feel of the current era leaves a lot for Brye to grasp and improve upon. [/hider] [/hider][/hider] Eᴅɪᴛs Mᴀᴅᴇ: ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᶜʳᵘᶜᶦᵗᵒʳⁿ ʷᶦᵗʰ ᵃᵖᵖʳᵒᵛᵃˡ ᶠʳᵒᵐ ᴱˡˡʳᶦ 7/7/19 ᵀʷᵉᵃᵏᵉᵈ ˢᵒᵐᵉ ˢᵏᶦˡˡˢ ᵃⁿᵈ ᵗʰᵉᶦʳ ᵉˣᵖˡᵃⁿᵃᵗᶦᵒⁿˢ 6/31/19 ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᵃ ʳᵉᶠᵉʳᵉⁿᶜᵉ ᵖᶦᶜᵗᵘʳᵉ ᵗᵒ ᴮʳʸᵉ'ˢ ⁿᵉʷ ˢᵃᵇᵉʳ 9/8/19 ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᵀʳᶦᵃˡˢ ᶜᵒᵐᵖˡᵉᵗᵉᵈ: 9/18/19 ᶜᵒᵘʳᵃᵍᵉ ᴵⁿˢᶦᵍʰᵗ