[@Reflection] I don't see any particular problems with Hagen. However, I'd say to add a mention of some sort of check (most likely Luck) to Dainsleif's instantkill bit, just so that it's more on the same page of similar NPs. [@Moonlit Sonata] & [@Rune_Alchemist] Both are alright, you can post them to the CS tab. [quote=@1Charak2] So, a question on the common battlefield. Are we fighting within or outside of the mooncell? (asking because inside the mooncell there is no pressure from the world which is what allows the insanity of the sakura AI to even exist) [/quote] Inside, but not as deep as the core, at least. And certainly not anywhere near the Far Side. [quote=@DocRock] Considering joining this, but before I do that, would any of the following be deemed acceptable? Asking just so I don't take up anyone's time. I probably won't be submitting anything until Weds, due to a trio of papers slamming into my radar at the same time. CCs: Charles Babbage James Moriarty(Archer since I don't know what his Caster stats would be) Thomas Edison(Caster) Nicolas Tesla OCs John Watson(Caster) Winston Churchill(Rider/Caster) Theodore Roosevelt(Rider) FDR(Caster/Rider/Archer, I can explain the other classes aside from Caster if needed) Alan Turing(Caster) Albert Einstein(Caster/Rider/Archer, same deal with FDR) ACs(Altered Canon) Neil Armstrong(Rider) Well aware I'm listing mostly modern servants, but they're all people I know well enough that I could attempt something. Armstrong is AC since while I'm aware that an astronaut is present in Extra(And gets wrecked by Drake), I'm not sure if they named him or not. Neil Armstrong does however make the most sense as to that Astronaut's TN due to his historical legacy(fight me on it if you like, but as someone with connections to the first Moon Landing, I know a lot about that event). I would have listed other CCs, but I wasn't sure if there was anyone else I could try my hands at. [/quote] That Astronaut is 90% certain to be Neil Armstrong. The only reason they don't namedrop him that he was alive until very recently and Nasu doesn't like to use people from too much recent History as Servants because it's harder to write about them with enough creative freedoms. If you want to use that as a concept, you can go ahead. I'll not give any opinions about who you should pick though, since that's supposed to be on your own. I'm just making sure you know that Armstrong is ok as a concept.