[quote=@I Need A Name]
[@KoL][@TheWindel]

[b][color=E1FFFF]• Name:[/color][/b] Illya [color=ed1c24][b]Reinhardt[/b][/color]

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Hmm... hmm... hmm...
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Putting that aside, since there may be more than one person with the same name in the world [i](sometimes)[/i]:

- And where does she put her emblem when she's not transformed? Unless she does walk around the city wearing a cape at all times.

-

[quote=@I Need A Name]
[u][color=E1FFFF]Volatile Wires:[/color][/u] Her Divine Arm is her soul as a magical girl; shielding her from those who refuse to face her head on. Although it serves as the source of her power; the further it is damaged the more her electrical attacks are supercharged. Gaining strength the more critical her viability stands.
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Not only does this not make any sense. It also contradicts this:

[quote=@I Need A Name]
[b][color=E1FFFF]• Divine Arm:[/color][/b] Armads: The duel-bladed axe swung with enough force to cleave dragons in two.
[/quote]

You can have one, not both, since they contradict one another.

- Lastly, fix that backstory. We don't ask for more than a single decent paragraph or two, but this is nowhere near it.