[quote=@IceHeart] [@Hawthorne] Rune magic route is pretty interesting. [i]Echidna[/i] not [i]Echnidna[/i], for some reason that just rubbed me the wrong way ha ha. So like with another profile I mentioned it could use a bit of sprucing up to make the profile really pop out. Add in some Bold font, make sure all the paragraphs are easily seen, etc. Well partially I went with my own version of the Nasuverse, so that I wouldn't have to get too bogged down with all the lore and stuff. Shouldn't be too much of a problem. After you make some chances I'll give it another look over. [/quote] Took your suggestions into account and added some formatting. Sorry about the Echidna thing; I'm usually a little better about typos, but I guess this one slipped underneath the radar. Let me know if there's anything else I can fix up.