[@Solotros] for Synros [hider=Synros] Right, you're on a good track. Having had the 'behind the scenes' talks that we did, I'm assured that you have enough stuff planned out to keep busy and do lots of things IC without growing bored or having to stretch, and my assurances on that end have swayed the other GMs. In more specific terms, we'd like to see some added detail on how Synros would behave towards the other cyclopes. We get the idea that he's rough and survival oriented, but it'd be nice to see how that is translated into his general mannerisms and way of speech, etc. Should we imagine him as the quiet fighter type, a crude loudmouth, some sort of polite barbarian..? I think you get the picture. Mutton and BB think that we should elaborate more upon personal appearance and the things that distinguish him from the other cyclopes. We can iron out those details together and talk about it more; I'm thinking that perhaps him having four arms is a unique trait. Just having all the cyclopes be really big, six-fingered, one-eyed, and with rocky bodies is probably enough to make them seem sufficiently monstrous and inhuman. Right, and we'd also like you to go through and do a thorough reading (or rereading) of the OP. Once these topics can be addressed we'll be able to accept you. [/hider]