Oh, I'm enjoying myself nicely ^^ I like that they both seem pretty perceptive of the other, so we should have a nice balance going on. I'd love to focus on Zach trying to build up trust, with Kiel doing his best to help the poor street kid. Perhaps he eventually feels something is off, but by then he's also pretty invested in Zach's well-being? As for events, they could eventually go into the town or perhaps one of the guys who beat him up show up at the church or someone warns Kiel that Zach is not to be trusted? Just tossing some ideas around ^^