[@Crusader Lord]

Fickle Fortune: EX is a bit too strong, taking down others' Luck by two ranks is way too much for a skill that's always active and can't be resisted. Applying a minus modifier is already enough.

The rest is pretty alright, I think.

[quote=@SubjectVision]
EDIT 2: I'll be sticking with Fierro in the end, and shelving this character to work on further along the line [@Parallel Hearts]. Apologies for the inconvenience
[/quote]

No worries. As said before Fierro is alright so you can move him to the CS is you wish.