These are just starter reviews, since I'm going to work soon and can't touch on everything. These are the major issues.

[@Odin]
[b]Uragiri Sakana[/b]
- [i]Ura Shishō Fūin:[/i] HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA, no. I know you have a "Oh it's just a character thing, she doesn't know how to do it herself. It's just for flavor" excuse. But [b]no[/b]. I will [i]not[/i] change my mind on this.
- [i]Your A Rank Jutsu:[/i] No. You're not getting any A-Rank jutsu if you're going to have 3 elements. You're trading power for versatility. You also have Great Fire Annihiliation as a B-rank jutsu. So why do you have it as A-rank and B-rank? 

[b]Sakamachi Sadako[/b]
- Too much jutsu for a fresh Genin. You'll probably be just out of the academy. So stuff like Chakra Needle with it's ability to change direction are already getting a no. Look at your sheet, pick what you feel needs to go, and drop it. Even Sasuke a prodigy only had Fireball jutsu as a new genin. Lee and Neji were already well into their genin years before they beat the shit out of Sasuke.