[@sassy1085] - There are still quite a lot of them, for example 
			-While growing up, Brooke have been always fascinated by her witch heritage and begins to train to be just like them but overtime she begins to think that she wants to follow her path to be a witch.

That whole phrase should be like this [b]"While growing up, Brooke has always been fascinated by her witch heritage and began to train to be just like them. But overtime she began to think that she wanted to follow her own path to be a witch."[/b]

It's things like that. There are many sentences that read awkwardly and words that seem like they aren't finished.