[@Sanity43217] Okay, here are my comments! :) [list][*]Powers - To start off with, you are limited to 2 powers max. Since he's been inhuman for a while, I'm okay with him having the max of two (generally, inhumans start off with just one). He can gain more powers as time goes on, but for now let's just have two. [*]His birth year and age don't match up - the in character date of the RP is October 24th, 2020 [*]Take out the house keys - SHIELD is going to have him on a mobile team so unless he has a strong reason to keep a house, it won't be practical for him. [*]The crate filled with gold... How'd he get this? [*]Under the anything else - you are missing something in addition to that paragraph [/list]