[@Silver Carrot]Because she has a kid, I want to know what the kid's name is and the story about her family. Like is she married, divorced, you mention things so casually but it is all important information to be elaborated in her back story. You also mention how she "learned from the animals." That could have been the theme for her martial arts. This isn't criticism just an idea. Looking over the techniques, I think you went more with a hunter theme. But yes, I do want to know more about the kid. Is the kid going to be a NPC because the child seems like they would have more of an opportunity for major growth and development than the mother because their mother is their mentor.