[quote=@mattmanganon] Alright, attempt 2. Is this good enough? [/quote] [quote=@mattmanganon]That's fair. [b]I have agreed to abandon the "Agents of Wakanda" idea for the moment[/b], as well as the invasion. Right now, it's going to be T'Challa travelling around the world, making some friends and some enemies and discovering that, when his father left Wakanda for a few months after T'Challa's mother died, he made quite a few fuck-ups. Currently, i'm trying to decide on who is T'Challa's guide to the world. I put up an idea for a re-imagining of Killer Croc, i'd love your take on it.[/quote] This was part of our arrangement when we talked about adjusting your character sheet. However: [quote=@mattmanganon]His first step on this road is to bring outsiders into his court. He wants to create a group of knights that will protect not only Wakanda, but the world at large.[/quote] You're still building your entire sheet around this idea of building the 'Knights of Wakanda.' We tried to explain to you that the problem wasn't the specific characters you were trying to take (though that was also problematic) but rather with the concept's foundation itself- you're putting together a team of disparate characters with little rhyme or reason outside of the fact that you want to mix DC and Marvel together. That in and of itself isn't a bad thing, obviously, or this game wouldn't be a thing. However, I believe there's a fundamental misunderstanding here about the objective of these kind of games. The idea isn't just to haphazardly slap together different bits and pieces of DC and Marvel canon just for the sake of it. Rather, it's to reimagine a character as existing in a combined universe, and putting a 'spin' on their circumstances while staying true to the core of the character. We don't believe your sheet meets this ideal, and unfortunately we don't think you're going to be a good fit for this game.