[quote=@Gunther] I seem to recall a conversation in the Interest Check thread about whether the RP should be Casual or Advanced. So far, I have only see Advanced level writing. This RP could have gone in either section with no worries whatsoever. The only thing I would suggest is keep your tenses the same outside of quotes. Should be third person past tense always; never present tense. [/quote] Have to say I'm thrilled with the posts so far!