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‘Her smile still playing mischievously at the edge of her lips.’

Playing would make it present.


Tbh it’s good feedback. Though may be getting flashbacks from my English lit A level 😂
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The way I see it is.. as long as I can read it immediately and it flows well, I'm not too fussed. If it's incorrect to the point where I have to read it back to understand it, then it needs fixing. But yours was nice and cohesive when I read it. :)