[quote=@Avemelle]
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Your character is very interesting, I suggest putting hiders on your character images as they are a bit large! On the other hand your skills seem a bit 'high-level', meaning they are described in a very powerful manner. Remember that you are starting off as a beginner warrior so don't expect black flames emitting from your sword, think of skills that use up a lot of stamina than your used to our a special backflip that leads into a striking attack. A majority of these skills are good for a high-level warrior but does not fit a low-level warrior! ^^ [b]Also I forgot a very vital part of the character sheet which is the background! I'm so sorry about that! >.< [/b]
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Also he forgot the secret password