[quote=@TheWindel] [@Spike] Quirk-wise, he's fine. Super strength for a shark is iffy but seeing as you don't go in-depth with it, I suppose it's fine. As for his weapon, I'm willing to accept it if you can explain to me what it has to do with his shark theme. Finally, the sample post is fine enough. I know the quality of writing you can and have produced so I'll only say this now; put as much effort as you can when concerning IC posts. [/quote] Ah thank you. Mmm the strength is mostly a growth option. For now he's capable of more than the average person but he's not going to the Olympics or anything. My thinking is most of his training is martial arts stuff. If he started body building with like protein and weights he could eventually get to a notch or two above what is normally possible for humans, but it would take at least a year or two. Mmm does as for the weapon need to have something to do with his shark thing? Ryan probably isn't the type to go around biting people most of the time so I figured he'd need a weapon. I don't think that Ryan is really the type to adhere to a theme, he's got a love-hate relationship with his sharky side. He needed a weapon and he started looking for them online and saw this Etsy store with a lot of crazy weapons and that's what he spent his tax return on. OOC I just really like the imagery of a dude with a giant pair of scissors that he can kinda transform. Mmm if it's really necessary I dunno maybe I could give him a chainsaw or make the blades serrated or something? That has "teeth." Or like I dunno he could maybe paint some sharks on it?