[@Duthguy]  Character looks fine, accepted.

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[@IceHeart] sorry, still not really used to this. Should I repost here?
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Yes it's general manners to post here first and then post to the character tab once approved.

[@Dumb1And1Lazy]

While I like the character there is a bit of a problem with the backstory and the monster mechanics.  Obviously I only recently added the magic rules so you didn't know about it until now, but with how memory works with the monsters it would be pretty much impossible for your character to know what happened on his first viewing of a battle.  Also the friends wouldn't actually be dead, they would just revert to a pre-magic state and completely forget about everything that would happen, though if the monster that killed them is still alive and decided to show back up...then they would be dead each time it appeared again.  Rarely happens but could be used as an interesting plot point you could use.