[@The Wyrm]

Looking over your character, a few things stood out.

For one thing, you have her as a spellsword yet also give her a berserk ability and have her outfitted like a paladin or knight. If she's going to be a spellsword, the berserk ability doesn't fit well and I'd think both that and her history would make her prefer not to have plate-chainmail armor for the ease of quicker and silenter movement as well as less hot in a tropical location, even if the priestesses could afford that. If you want her to be a berserker, then she could keep the berserk ability and a paladin of whatever order she joins could be a more reasonable fit for the armor and weapon while also allowing spell use.

For another, some parts of the backstory come out as being dark for the sake of being dark. At the very least, maybe allow us to read things between the lines more?