[quote=Taerinn]Selan's been (intentionally on my part) acting a bit strange during this chapter, and if things still go according to plan, all of the characters are going to find out why sooner or later. The fact that her only notable talent is in song and dance and she's suddenly a celebrity over it should be a bit more notable, IMO. As should the fact that she's and no one (save for Moira and Lisette) is particularly concerned about either of their safety, not even their personal vigilante. :/ I've been told by a couple of you that we're not aiming to write a perfect novel or anything, but I do care enough about good writing to think that the situation's a bit odd, I dunno?? [/quote] Okay, I want to respond to this - in the first half of the chapter Selan was acting off - but most of that Dylan could chalk up to booze and seasickness, especially since he wasn't part of the beach crew. Also, I want to respond to these oddities, but Dylan's hungover. I'm trying to keep to that as organically as possible (though I'm worried about how that's being done, cause I am completely unfamiliar with this kind of situation.) And the whole concert/paparazzi thing? IC time it probably hasn't been 5 minutes, and there has been no chance to breath since then. Once they are done running and being chased and perhaps when Dylan has something in him to help counteract the effects of the hangover, I'm sure there will be some IC discussion.