[@The Harbinger of Ferocity] Alright, just so I can get a grasp of the system, would this be okay for a 'next post'? Word choice and sentence structure and all

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I pocket the necklace, for perhaps it may be useful down the line. And, after a final check for any more overlooked objects, I head further inland. 
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And would I be able to write another sentence/action for a third sentence, or is there a limit on how many actions taken per post?