[@Asura] Your point-buy checks out. You didn't put the name of your background in the features tab, just pointing it out. You also still have the spellcasting tab in there, though you can't actually cast spells yet. I won't ask you to remove it, but you will need to update it to the paladin rules ^^;
The Order of the Golden Lion isn't one of the original suggestions, I think? We'll need to discuss that.

[@LordOfTheNight] Your AC and HP are [i]way[/i] too high - you're a level 1 bard, with a base HP of 8 plus your constitution modifier, which from your numbers is +2, and you would only get 12 or 13 AC, depending on your dexterity modifier, since you start with leather armour. I assume from your stats, you're going for standard human, not variant; I will inform you, the number in the brackets is for your modifiers, not your racial bonuses. Additionally, your stats are not viable. To have the stats you do, that would be either 20 points, or 28 points, not 27.
You have too few proficiencies - Bards have proficiency in three skills, and three instruments; Charlatans have proficiency in Deception, Sleight of Hand, the Disguise Kit, and the Forgery Kit. As a human, you speak two languages - common and one other. Your lute counts as a weapon for the purposes of this application, as it is your spellcasting focus.
You appear to have missed some of the colour areas, and there's a section that technically should be inside the hider - I think you're missing one of the /hiders.

[@DrakeEricsen] The picture is fine, don't worry about it. Your stats check out, but you have too much HP. Clerics start with a base HP of 8 + Constitution - you should have 12 total, accounting for your dwarven toughness trait. Also, you have proficiency in Vehicles (land), not Vehicles (cart) - you can use them all.
Your Arms and Armour should be in the following format;
[b]Armour[/b] | Chainmail | Shield
[b]Weapons[/b] | Battleaxe | Light Crossbow
I don't need to know the damage it does and the information on any spells you have can be put into the spellcasting section.
With the short story - I admit that the fault is on me, for this, but it's far more likely that you would have met Sebastian, not Cassandra.
I already know what the cleric, dwarf and mercenary backgrounds give you proficiency in. You don't need to tell me that. 
Please do not abridge the text regarding your features - if you must, use [url=http://gdnd.wikidot.com/start:welcome]this website[/url] to copy-paste them (with the exception of the [url=http://dnd5e.wikidot.com/background:mercenary-veteran]Mercenary Veteran[/url], which isn't featured there).
Linking the pages of the spells isn't enough - please follow the format I laid out; look at Cayden's spellsheet for an example. I trust you guys to be accurate :sun
As for your origin... we'll discuss that in PMs. I have an idea for [i]that.[/i]

[@Tangletail] Ah, the boi. Remember, Storm Sorcery is your subclass, so that should be in brackets. I'm curious as to how he learned to speak Gnoll... that isn't a language choice, you see, unless I've been misinformed. There's also a couple of places that you missed changing the colour code, but that's fine. You also don't have/won't get any expertise tools/skills unless you multiclass, so you're safe to remove those.
Huh. I didn't think about non-armoured classes. You can remove that line from Arms & Armour.
Tempestuous magic counts as a Class feature, not a Spellcasting rule. Also, please change 'Prepared Spells' to 'Spells Known', as Sorcerers operate on that rule.

[@Vertigo] I didn't think about having tools in the arms & armour section... hmm. Well, I won't say remove it, but please remember to separate different items with a |.
I already know about your origin, no need to apologise for that. XD
Most everything else looks good; I just need a writing sample from you, and it'll be complete!