[@MsMorningstar] [s]I'm a masochist. And I have too much free time. ;D[/s] Well I'm trying to show each individual how one may see or interpret their story, or at least why I thought the way I did.

It's long because I want to explain it in a way that isn't a hollow praise that fails to point out mistakes because they obviously didn't read it. Or a vague and unspecified critique for the same reasons. What's the point of reviewing something and not doing it at least somewhat in-depth? Especially if you read something with effort, where I feel obligated to show the same courtesy. Or such lack thereof, I want to pick it apart because it's the only way to expose it to the writer. (Best disinfectant is sunlight, so they say.)

So that anyone who cares will be able to write better in the future. It also helps me learn to be a better editor and reader with practice.

And appreciate the sentiment, I do try my best...