[s]I saw three things that might need to be changed.[/s]

[hider=Norixius, Surina 'Fingerlicker'[center] 
Change to [hider=Norixius, Surina 'Fingerlicker'][center]

And this
[color=YourColourHere]Other[/color]
You need to put 00746b  In place of YourColourHere

At the very end, after 
Anything else you want people to know about your character.  
add [/hider]

Good job!