[@Jasonhero] Okay, here are my notes! [list][*]This first one is super OCD of me but eh. It should all be on one line for the entries like name, birthday, etc.. So it should be Name: Roman Carter and not Name, then a new line, Roman Carter. [*]Is he related to Peggy Carter? [*]As Blue mentioned in chat, the Iron Man/War Machine suits are patented by Stark Industries and they have fierce lawyers, not to mention Tony usually goes and blows up the suits of any copycats (it's Tony, after all). So I recommend editing that out unless you want to deal with that conflict and I doubt Roman would want to. [*]Another super OCD thing, there's an extra line space you have with Habits and Hobbies. See the coding you did right below in the Fears section in order to get it to look right. ^^ (If you need help with coding, just lemme know) [*]In general world skills, driving a car/motorcycle would need to be broken up, as those are two very different skills [*]OCD again, extra line space you have in General Skills [*]In the what is on your person, delete the instructions for filling out the CS you have there. Same thing in possessions. [*]For what is on your person - I recommend giving him some clothes to wear [*]Missing something under the anything else. ^^ [*]The color code looks a bit too similar to Wanda Maximoff's - [color=red]for reference[/color] [/list]